1.My sister and I like to wakebord for fun .
2.On top of the high score board were Carl and me
3.My friends and I went on a boat trip
4.My sister and i got sick
5.The best group was Alex and me
6.My dad and i went on a rolorcoster
1.My mother and sister buy frivolous shoes at the mall
2.The nefarious man kidnapped the child to kill him
3.The water was so corrugated i got sea sick
4.My sister is so conceited,she takes 2 hours in the bathroom
5.My mom asked "what is that fetid smell" when walking in the jungle
6.The sentience poured chemicals in the vial
7.I got isolated in an desolate room
8.The animals mouth was frothing because it had rabies
9.I was gagging because of the smoke in the air
10.It was intolerable the way the monkey behaved
4 comments:
Capital letters?
Edit 1, 2, 3, 5.
Edit 2. It's a very tricky one because of the way you wrote the sentence. Go back in and punctuate properly. This means put spaces in, use capital letters, and periods.
Nice work with the meanings, Yohannes, but again, go back and edit the sentences for basic construction improvements.
Yohannes, I'm still hoping to see some changes in how these sentences look. You know, capital letters and spacings?
Getting better, Yohannes. Now what about putting periods at the end of the sentences? Any chance of that?
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