Thursday, February 4, 2010
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I am 18 and I am already married I guese I got married becuase I hated to be with my mother and my father controling my life so I think thats something that I dont tell very much and know that I hav finaly left my house and free for good I dont even have tho think about people controling my life. The person I got married to is Roy llewis he is a hard working man some one that I can trust. so know that I am finally free even though I still have to work hard for a living I fell good
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I think you should have more periods, because your first sentence is five lines long. You should also work on the flowing of the writing but it is sad about your grandmother hating her parents...
Even though I hardly know you, I don't think you're married and especially to a boy... because that's kind of (you-know-what) and you don't look that much like an adult. I guess this must be a story.
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